It sounds like it's in a rush, but it's not. Reaching your destination? I think you have a goal there.
Second, Empire State.
Pop question? Where is Empire State located? Of course I know the answer! For I know the answer to my question, I leave this to you then. So, where?
Thirdly, it feels so... Upscale and in a whole new kind of level.
It gives you already an idea of how the story goes--- chasing (police, cops, detectives) or (architects, engineers due to buildings) Hahaha. No, this will be more of a suspense to the readers. (It's NOT going to be a suspense type of story!)
Genre? The only sure genre I have for this book is sarcasm, romance, drama and a little bit of humor here and there. (Yet don't mistake it for a romantic comedy. Yikes! Not going to happen tho)
Alright, I'm blabbering again. Time to go.
P.S. I am back on track in terms of finishing what I love to start. Do not dare to interrupt such a marvelous idea! (Not really, feel free to go crazy on me)